Your Photo: Our Critique

Tray Murphy submitted this image taken with a Canon Rebel XTi, 1/160 sec, f/5.6, ISO 400. This photo has some interesting lines and fascinating colors from the lighting and is a nice arcade photo. There is no real interest point in this photo besides the line of lit up clown faces which lead to nothing. To take this shot from a basic photo to a strong photo it needs something more than just a pattern of clown lights.

Tray Murphy submitted this image taken with a Canon Rebel XTi, 1/160 sec, f/5.6, ISO 400. This photo has some interesting lines and fascinating colors from the lighting and is a nice arcade photo. There is no real interest point in this photo besides the line of lit up clown faces which lead to nothing. To take this shot from a basic photo to a strong photo it needs something more than just a pattern of clown lights. I can see the water from the guns hitting the two clowns that are the brightest, if your intent was to show the actual playing of the game, show me more of the participants. 
—Melissa Macatee
Contributing Blogger

__This photo gets two and a half stars on the PopPhoto Flash rating system.

The PopPhoto Flash rating system.
*= This part of the camera is called the lens
**= Don't quit your day job
***= Good, but not yet great
****=So close you can taste it
*****= Yes, a thousand times yes!

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