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Original photoAdjusted and cropped This photo was submitted by Abiy Desta. Capturing the bird in flight is not an easy task, but unfortunately the bird and the background blend together. With such similar colors there is no separation from the background. To bring more focus to the birds use a crop that makes it easier for the viewer to find them.

Original photo Adjusted and cropped

This photo was submitted by Abiy Desta. Capturing the bird in flight is not an easy task, but unfortunately the bird and the background blend together. With such similar colors there is no separation from the background. To bring more focus to the birds use a crop that makes it easier for the viewer to find them. A few adjustments to curves and saturation has brought out the birds a little but they still tend to blend in.
—Melissa Macatee
Contributing Blogger

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This photo gets two and a half stars on the PopPhoto Flash rating system.

The PopPhoto Flash rating system.
*= This part of the camera is called the lens
**= Don't quit your day job
***= Good, but not yet great
****=So close you can taste it
*****= Yes, a thousand times yes!

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